It was Midnight,
When I saw the light,
I saw my soul,
Being carried by the wind,
My soul was flying,
Freely and High,
For once I felt free,
I felt like nothing could hold me back now,
But when the wind stoped,
my soul came back to me,
Now I felt inprisoned,
Within my body,
All I could hope for now,
Is for that soul taking wind,
To come again.
And let my soul be free once more
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I was think of my singnature and i like the work Midnight, soi came up with this poem. I hope u like it
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Well, you change the tense alot. "Now I felt." That doesn't work. you can't felt something now. You can feel something now, but putting two different tenses in the one phrase just doesn't work; at all. You also repeated certain words and phrases alot, such as "soul" and "I saw", and that gets rather redundant after a while. I do, however, like where you were going with this, it's a good idea. Nice
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